Descriptive Writing

Kiaora Whānau

This week we are using Descriptive words to make our work sound exciting and good enough to eat.


Glass- by Max

Glass is an invisible wall of force energy. It is the nightmare of fish and sea critters like Sponge Bob and Patrick.
It is the object that murders thousands of grains of salt in its making.
It is a wall of energy that is solid and thick.
It kills animals because they hit it without knowing a thing. They slide down it and they lie on the ground completely stunned.


Listen- by Isabella

Listen
I can hear the wind blowing all the trees side to side. The wind blows the rain down to the ground, very, very fast.
As the cars pass the rain suddenly slows down. No one had spoken, it was very windy. Foot steps walk pass.
The rain goes splat! on the roof
The noise of the rubbers rubbing their writing out.
The paper going up and down as the wind blows it.

WHAEA TRINA- na Kahurangi

WHAEA TRINA
funny, awesome, super, great
I think of Whāea Trina as a solid gold super hero, flying in the sky.

AMIRIA
little, cute, funny, awesome
I think that Amiria is a cute little girl with a very big heart.

HINERANGI- na Neihana

Curious, eager to know what is going on
Happy, curious and colourful

LISTEN- na Ella

I hear trees rustling like whispering voices that are telling stories
I hear the rain drops pattering on the roof
I hear wind blowing like it is telling me something
When I close my eyes I hear peace.
Peaceful rain, trees and raindrops saying goodbye to their clouds as they plummet to the dark Earth.
I hear leaves saying goodbye, I hear flax whispering.