More writing

Kia ora ano Whānau

Here are some more tuhinga from our Tamariki in Te Pouahi Tekau Ma Rima,,

Tamariki were given 2 pictures to look at and from these- use som eof your 5 senses, Metaphors, similes and vivid descriptions to lead the reader into your writing.

"WHITE"
The snow was as white as a winter partridgeman. Artic hares ran around the houses and eagles soared around the mountain. The houses looked like iced cakes in the sunlight and the ground as if a baker had sprinkled icing sugar all over it.
The snow covered mountain watched over the valley in the dying sun and thought of how much time he was going to stay in his pearly white cloak.
He peered into the sky and saw God uncurling his white beard.

Na Max

"Food"
The Zebra fell victim to the mighty Lioness who gave the Zebra goosebumps as she chased him until he weakened in his legs. He heard the fierce predator charging from behind, he must have made a good meal!

Na Neihana


"Food"
As I see the deeathening blood drip down its face, I heard its Mother scream. The wind stopped then the grass stood still as the Cheetah took its prey.
I felt the coldness on the grass as I ran, ran and ran.

Na Tanisha